I have evaluated my former position on the story, and I am glad to say that I have started writing again. I found the location and time period. Not a whole world, mind you, but only part of it. It is flavored with the history of ours, and yet somewhat out of place with it. Establishment of Character is the most amusing part. I am finding introductions extremely detailed, yet touched with that skewed perspective that I wanted to deliver clearly to the reader.
I admit to say, this is a story that I would have liked to read. That is not to be vain, but I wanted something solid. Something believable and yet.... something slightly wrong, something slightly supernatural. Just a hint.
The feel is to me like walking through the a gothic structured hall, lined with stain glass windows. It is old, doctrinal, full of law... of belief... and how one translates it into one's actions.
- Mood:
Isolated - Listening to: "Dentro Me" RyanDan
- Reading: "Heretics" G.K. Chesterton
- Watching: The Time fly by
- Eating: Nothing
- Drinking: Dr. Pepper
Devious Comments
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Bulkhead: "Maybe we should lure them someplace safer first?"
Prime: "Good thinking Bulkhead"
Bulkhead: "He said good thinking"
Bumblebee: "And Bulkhead"
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"Aft-brain, slag pit, son of Unicron!"
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